Today (20 February, 2025) I was assigned to compose a poem instantly by looking at this picture. And then, obeying my teacher's instruction, I wrote one poem.
Here it is:
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When I was a child,"Memory Packed in Dal Bhat"
my mom used to cook dal bhat.
feed me with her hands full of love,
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I don't know how it is, but it's the way I expressed my emotions...
After coming home, I looked at the poem again and want to publish it on my blog without delay. Then I started revising the literature notebook where I had written about use of literacy devices. I went through some pages and tried 2-3 times and finally made it.
The final version looks like this:
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"Memory Packed in Dal Bhat"
When I was a child,
Mom used to cook dal bhat,
feeding me with her hands,
filled with love.
Now, I live far from home,
alone, on my own.
I miss her,
I miss her food,
I miss the way she used to feed me.
I miss everything,
my home, my family, my friends.
And I don’t know
when I’ll see them again.
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I tried using some literary devices to make it even better, but it didn't work as I expected. I'll learn more things and try to write even more better poems and other sorts of writing.
Author:
Lovedev Sharma
Undergraduate Student
BA (English Studies) & B.Ed. (TESOL)
Kathmandu University, School of Education
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